Wednesday, May 23, 2012
2. Uncle Jimmy is integral to Sophie’s emotional recovery. What does he do that helps her rebuild her confidence and find happiness?
Jimmy
is integral to Sophie’s emotional recovery because he helps her find happiness
and gain her confidence. The first thing he does is give her confidence in
herself by giving her a bit of a push in the right direction and gets her to
open up and start being herself again. The interaction between Jimmy and Sophie
helps her to come out of her shell as he shows her he does care and gets to her
realise her true talent for pottery. He nurtures that talent and encourages
Sophie to use it in a positive way overall making her feel good about herself
and boosting her confidence and happiness in her life.
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You have done a really good job at grasping the idea and you have a good concept to work this, however you need to include evidence and quotations to help prove your point, and you can also synthesis you evidence. You also might want to proof read and think about your sentence structure. But other wise you have a good start that you just need to develop.
ReplyDeleteI like your idea and the way how you explained that Jimmy was a crucial part of Sophies emotional recovery. You might need to add some evidence to help back up your idea. Your TEC structure is alright but could be improved. Your language is formal, and flows nicely, good work. Remember to state: how the author has positioned the character in a certain way to get the overall effect?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Chelsea :)